Developmental Editing & Story Coaching for Children’s and YA Authors
Wildflower Editorial helps authors of children’s, middle grade, young adult, and new adult fiction strengthen their stories through thoughtful developmental editing, manuscript assessments, and story coaching and consultation.
From early drafts to submission-ready manuscripts, writers receive craft-focused editorial feedback that strengthens plot structure, deepens character arcs, and refines pacing while protecting each author’s authentic voice.
Book a free 15-minute First Bloom Call. Let’s talk about where your story could grow.
Serious About Your Story? So Am I.
You’ve written a draft. You know it can be stronger. But you’re too close to the manuscript to see what’s working—and what isn’t.
Hi, I’m Rachel Vine
I work with children’s, middle grade, YA and NA authors who want more than surface edits. Together, we examine the foundation of your story:
✿ Structure and pacing
✿ Character arcs and motivation
✿ Emotional resonance
✿ Voice and thematic cohesion
Beyond grammar and spelling, story-level work ensures your manuscript is polished, cohesive, and ready to impress readers or publishers.
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Why Authors Choose Wildflower Editorial
I’m not just an editor.
I’m a story specialist with a background in children’s literature, publishing studies, and literary analysis.
✿ Professional Member of IPEd
✿ Children’ librarian with deep genre knowledge
✿ Specialist in children’s, YA and NA storytelling
Writers come to me for:
✔︎ Clear, honest feedback
✔︎ Deep structural insight
✔︎ Editorial guidance rooted in story craft
✔︎ A thoughtful, analytical approach
✔︎ Specialist knowledge and advice for authors of children’s, YA and NA manuscripts
Picture Book Editing Package
Manuscript Assessment
Developmental Editing
Story Coaching and Consultation
Kind Words from Past Clients
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“As a repeat client, one of the best things is Rachel’s enthusiasm for my writing and acknowledgement of my growth as we’ve worked together. This makes the feedback I receive even more meaningful.”
— Brittany Leonard
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“Rachel is professional, passionate, thorough and encouraging. She has taken my work to a new level while also providing me with a great boost of confidence. ’m thrilled with my edits"
— Beth Wilson
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"The feedback was so helpful and to the point. I was blown away with the huge effort that went into this edit. Rachel praised and made recommendations without making me feel like a complete novice.”
— Thea Thielke
Ready to Strengthen Your Manuscript?
If you’re serious about revision and preparing your story for publication, let’s talk.
Book a Free First Bloom Call or request a quote for developmental editing.
I acknowledge the First Nations people as the traditional custodians of this country where I live and work and recognise their continued connection to land, waters, and community. I pay my respects to elders past, present, and emerging. This land was never ceded—it is, was, and will always be Aboriginal land.
A proudly LGBTQIA+ friendly business. Everyone is welcome.
Concession discounts are available to authors who qualify—contact me for more information.
