Your story deserves to
Developmental editing, manuscript assessments, and story coaching for children’s, middle grade, young adult, and new adult fiction writers.
Where Shall We Begin?
I've written a picture book
I'm looking for specialist editorial support to help my picture book bloom.
My manuscript needs fresh eyes
I've written my story and I'm ready for editorial feedback to help me take it further.
I'm finding my way with a story
I've got an idea, I'm working through a draft, or I could use some guidance along the way.
I'm here for inspiration
I'm looking for writing advice, storycraft resources, podcasts and a little creative inspiration.
Not sure where to start?
We can figure that out together.
Every story begins somewhere. Let's talk about yours.
The First Bloom Call is a complimentary 15-minute conversation to explore your story, ask questions and discover how manuscript assessments, developmental editing or story coaching might help you move forward.
Whether you're nurturing an idea or revising a manuscript, we'll find the support that feels right for you and your story.
Hi, I’m Rachel Vine
I'm a developmental editor and story coach, a former children's and youth librarian, and a lifelong lover of stories.
I specialise in picture books, children's and middle grade fiction, and young adult and new adult novels. Whether you're nurturing a new idea or finding your way through revisions, I'm here to help you strengthen your storytelling, explore new possibilities and bring your creative vision to life.
Because whatever stage you're at, your story should always feel like yours.
“Rachel is professional, passionate, thorough and encouraging. She has taken my work to a new level while also providing me with a great boost of confidence. I will definitely be working with her again.”
Bethany Arliss, Author of The Shadow Fractures trilogy
Stories for Every Stage of Growing Up
From the wonder of a first picture book to the complexities of finding your place in the world, every stage of growing up brings its own stories.
I specialise in fiction for children, teenagers and emerging adults, helping authors create stories that connect with their readers, wherever they are in life.
Picture Books
Big ideas, little readers and the magic of storytelling through words and pictures.
Children's & Middle Grade
Imagination, adventure, discovery and finding your place in the world.
Young Adult
Big feelings, complicated relationships, identity and finding your own voice.
New Adult
New beginnings, independence, love and navigating the possibilities of adulthood.
THE EDITORIAL COLLECTION
The Full Bloom Developmental Edit
An in-depth edit combining a detailed editorial report with extensive in-manuscript feedback to strengthen your story from the inside out.
The Blooming Garden Picture Book Package
Specialist picture book editing combining developmental feedback, manuscript annotations and copyediting to help your story flourish.
In the Margins
Editorial Reaction Read
Discover what an editor notices as your story unfolds.
Upon Reflection
Five-Question Reading Report
Your story. Your questions. My considered perspective.
On Second Reading
Revision Review
A fresh look at the story you've been working to strengthen.
THE STORY SESSIONS
The Muse
For the story waiting to be written.
Have a spark of an idea but aren't sure what to do with it? Let's explore its possibilities, develop its foundations and turn that little spark into a story you're excited to write.
The Plot Twist
For when you've lost the plot. Literally.
Hit a wall with your manuscript? Whether you're tangled in plot threads, questioning your direction or unsure what happens next, let's unravel the tricky bits and find your way forward.
The Protagonist
For the characters who make your story.
Great stories begin with characters worth caring about. Let's get to know yours a little better, exploring their motivations, desires, flaws and relationships to create characters who feel wonderfully real.
The Unreliable Narrator
For when your inner critic gets a little too loud.
Second-guessing every sentence? Struggling with perfectionism, comparison or the fear that your writing isn't good enough? Let's quiet that unreliable narrator in your head and help you rediscover your creative confidence.
KIND WORDS FROM PAST CLIENTS
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“As a repeat client, one of the best things is Rachel’s enthusiasm for my writing and acknowledgement of my growth as we’ve worked together. This makes the feedback I receive even more meaningful.”
— Brittany Leonard
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“Rachel is professional, passionate, thorough and encouraging. She has taken my work to a new level while also providing me with a great boost of confidence. I’m thrilled with my edits"
— Beth Wilson
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"The feedback was so helpful and to the point. I was blown away with the huge effort that went into this edit. Rachel praised and made recommendations without making me feel like a complete novice.”
— Thea Thielke
Ready to Strengthen Your Manuscript?
If you’re serious about revision and preparing your story for publication, let’s talk.
Book a Free First Bloom Call or request a quote for developmental editing.
I acknowledge the First Nations people as the traditional custodians of this country where I live and work and recognise their continued connection to land, waters, and community. I pay my respects to elders past, present, and emerging. This land was never ceded—it is, was, and will always be Aboriginal land.
A proudly LGBTQIA+ friendly business. Everyone is welcome.
Concession discounts are available to authors who qualify—contact me for more information.
